Wednesday 19 June 2019
A moment in time
I heard screaming,I heard the rocks on the cliff sides cracking.I felt like the rocks would fall on me.One step off the cliff is death every day.I think that it might be my last time seeing my family.I see my house.I see my town.I see my mum and my dad.I felt like I was going to fall to my death.I'm feeling sick because my bag is so heavy.I wonder if my teacher took the right track.I wonder if I'm going to collapse on to my knees.
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cool Kingston i liked how you described how you would feel and in also see that you were trying really hard good job
ReplyDeleteHi Kingston I love how you put in a lot of sad things that might happen but just be clad we are not there.From sharron
ReplyDeleteHey Kingi
ReplyDeleteIts your sista Astyn!!
I love how you explained this so thoroughly.
In some of your posts I see a few spelling mistakes so maybe you could check your learning with a buddy, and buddy mark.
but either than that You have been doing some awesome learning
keep up the great work!