One Rainy day Rosie fell to the ground at the point where the river Thames starts.
I saw a maker that said stuff about the river and the trail to go to the river. I followed the trail and hopped in the water and went down stream. It was a slow current but I travelled far in a matter of seconds.
It was a calm morning in the river. I hear birds chirping, I saw the fish jumping. It was a chilly morning but the sun was shining.
I started heading into town. I could hear people having their morning cups of tea. I saw a lot of pollution in the water. I felt like talking to the man about it but they will just drink me.
I'm seeing more boats and people on waka doing waka ama.Im seeing dead fish everywhere. It was so calm in the water but I sank to the bottom. I cant believe how much plastic is under all this water. I seem like I'm traversing faster and faster.
I soon arrived in the centre of london. I can suddenly see more people using wheat stores and metal ones too. I'm seeing heap’s or electric cars in london. I traveled under the london bridge as people were dumping rubbish off the bridge it was horrible.
I can see the sea, I'm in salt water now, I can see heaps of sea life. 10 minute’s more people take care of the earth. I can see people picking up rubbish, “ I'm proud of them”.
hi there kingston its Nela from oturu school I like the way you told us your story you could maybe remebmer to add a walt.who is rosie
ReplyDeleteI really like your story Kingston its that you got to go in a waka i go to oturu school too keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kingston, my name is Ashdyn and I go Oturu school. I really liked your story about Rosies rain drop because I could feel the passion and thought that you had put in this story. And the setting that you had set the story in was simplistic because you always tell the reader where the character ends up. Your story is beautiful and I would love to read another one of your storys
ReplyDeletekia ora kingston im Aaron from oturu school, my favourite subject is writing and I liked your amazing story.There were some awesome descriptive words in there and as a writer i can tell that you were compassionate while writing this piece.But overall this was a really great story good job.
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